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This is a very interesting drawing! The colors on it are amazing and I think the wrinkles in the cloth are very well done.The anatomy o...


Man... I really like how this looks! I think the poses are great and so are the expressions. I think that the style also looks like it ...


So I'll start off saying that the coloring is done pretty well for a beginner. First I would recommend that when lines intersect you sh...


Honestly, this is a very beautiful piece. From the anatomy and the eyes, it looks so well done! But the shading is a little off, so the...

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This is a very interesting drawing! The colors on it are amazing and I think the wrinkles in the cloth are very well done.The anatomy on the wolf is also very good, and for once I like how it has a sketchy look to it. Though, I feel as if one of the back paws (Mostly the left one) should have its toes slightly apart like the front right paw. Other than that I don't see anything wrong with the rest of this piece unless I'm missing something. In summary, this is very well drawn, and there isn't anything really wrong with it, maybe changing the back left paw.
Man... I really like how this looks! I think the poses are great and so are the expressions. I think that the style also looks like it should belong in some sort of WoF comic if one was made. There are a few problems with the Sandwing in the back though. First, his tail seems a little too thick, and his wing looks a little deformed, maybe just thinning out the tail and looking at a few references could help! The last thing is that I think that the background could have a tiny bit more detail put into it. Something like more grass would work fine. Overall, this is a very good piece and I like it a lot!
So I'll start off saying that the coloring is done pretty well for a beginner. First I would recommend that when lines intersect you shouldn't keep them, but ease the tips. Also, your anatomy is off, I'd recommend looking at pictures of wolves to get a better outcome. The lines are also pretty messy and could be fixed up with a bit more effort. The eye that is on the left side of the muzzle should be raised up to match the height of the other eye. You should consider using a program that has layers so you can color without it messing up the lines. I'd suggest using Firealapaca! It's free and a nice step into better art programs. (I'm assuming that you're using something like Ms paint or online art programs.)
Honestly, this is a very beautiful piece. From the anatomy and the eyes, it looks so well done! But the shading is a little off, so there is a light source coming from the bottom left and the top left, but it seems that the shading has just been put in the creases of the fur and jaw. Then the color from black to white looks odd, I think it might've been because of the blur that's on it. Again with the shading the light that is reflecting off the nose can probably be put a little to the fire to show that it is reflecting off from that. The background here is be stunning and I love that grass to death, it look like that took a very long time! Also the extra creature eyes are a nice touch. :}
Hello there! So I have to say over all the design looks simple yet sweet and I absolutely love how the spikes on the tip of the tail and wings look jagged, I think it really adds to the overall look of this dragon! So if you zoom in and look at the wings you can see that there is some coloring flaws there that can be fixed by just zooming in and filling them in. I also feel as though the blue that is on the over part of this dragon's wings seems out of place even though it is a dark shade along with the others, maybe finding a duller blue could help. Still, this piece was pleasant to look at and made me like this character even though I don't know a thing about her!

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